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[Marleen's Dance]

Nice animation, but what's with the creepy kid at the end? I like the subliminal stuff in the background. I feel that with this short of a video and this simple of a story, the animation could have had a little more focus.

Bertn1991 responds:

Marleen and the creepy kid at the end are both characters in a series of mine. The kid is like Marleen's biggest fan. Anywho, thank you for your kindness. People seem very mixed on this one. I'm glad someone actually mentioned the stuff in the background though. Anywho, I agree with you completely. Thank you very much : )